The Maccion Invasion
Disclaimer
Introduction
Act 1: Not Again
Act 2: The Gathering Storm
Disclaimer
Disclaimer: All of the characters, places, technology, ect. that was
mentioned or appeared in the TV show is property of Universal Studios and
I am just borrowing to continue an Epic that must be continued. All other
events characters ect are mine.
Introduction
I have added several characters and events.
First, this story will begin directly after the final moments in "Beyond
Chaos."
New Characters:
Captain Gregory Long: Captain of the ExoCarrier Repulse. He is 5'7" with
brown hair, muscular body, and a small scar on the left of his forehead.
During the first year of the war he was the leader of Flight One: Charlie
squad off of the Resolute. After Charlie, Baker, and Able squad were sent
after the Olympus Mons in "Resist" he lead his squad in several impressive
battles and joined with different resistance groups until Charlie squad
rejoined the exofleet directly following Capt. Marcus's Botched attack in
"The Brood" After that he was promoted constantly until during the Final
battle he was the XO of the Nautilus. After the war he was given command
of the first new ExoCarrier, The Repulse.
Admiral Maureen Shefield: 3nd in command of the ExoFleet after Admiral
Winfield, who has returned to duty because of the crisis that will be
taking place in this story, and Admiral Simbacca (who is now the supreme
commander of all allied forces) . She is 6'0", has brilliant red hair is
about 34 and has an amazing body. She has slowly risen threw the ranks of
the exofleet, but began duty when she was 18 as a jump trooper.
Lieutenant Michael Marcus: Nephew of Mathew Marcus, is trying to get out
of the shadow of his infamous uncle, served in the resistance based in
Houston Texas. Took over lead of Charlie Squad after Capt. Long now
serves off of the Repulse. Only member of Charlie squad not on Chaos when
it disappears.
Captain Robert Richards: Captain of the ExoCruiser Magellan.
The Maccionians: A race of Super Advanced creatures with the mental
abilities of a neo mega and the strength of a neo lord. They are
typically red skinned and about 2 meters (8feet) tall. They Fly
E-Frames, Cap ships and others just like us.
New Ships, Tech, E-Frames, ect.
EFS Repulse: Under the command of Captain Gregory Long, she is slightly
larger than the Resolute II and is slightly better armed. She was the
first ExoCarrier made after the war and is just going threw her trial run
near Pluto as Chaos disappears. She contains several brand new
technologies.
Portable GRAF shield: A small version of a GRAF shield,
it doesn't have the power to destroy enemy E-Frames of Ships but it does
destroy any enemy missiles that get within 100 meters of the Ship. It
also can deflect laser blasts in other directions. A smaller version has
been fitter to Capt. Long's personal E-Frame. This version serves the
same purpose as the one on the Repulse, but it uses so much power that it
can only be used 10 times during a battle, meaning that Capt. Long still
has to evade enemy shots as often as possible.
Charged Antimatter
Propulsion System: A new type of engine that allows capitol ships to go
150% faster than normal for periods of 1 hour or less, before it must cool
down for half a day.
Automated E-frames: The Repulse carries 20
small computerized E-frames, much like the ones Algernon used to
demonstrate his upgrades to Able Squad's Frames', these AE-Frames
(A=Automated) work as an extension of the Repulse's many gun and missile
emplacements.
The Repulse and the Magellan Both are equipped
with Cloaking Devices
Specially Modified Personal E-Frame: Capt. Long's E-Frame was originally
an Aerial Assault E-Frame but has been heavily modified. First, the wings
that come off of the engine pods have been removed and the Gattaling Gun
has been replaced with the right hand gun of a Spy/Logistics E-Frame (the
one that looks like a machine gun). For missiles it has the two turbo
missile launchers standard on an Aerial Assault E-Frame. It also has the
multi-missile launchers from a High Speed Stealth E-Frame, but instead of
being shoulder mounted his are hip mounted. Also the E-Frame has the same
Pilot/E-Frame interface that Alec Deleon's Craft does. Finally it has a
smaller version of the GRAF shield Generator.
Exo-Cruiser Magellan: Cruiser assigned as escort to the Repulse
Maccion E-Frame: The Maccion E-frames appear to be in the shape of their
bodies (like ours) and have many weapons emplacements. They are twice as
fast, have twice the fire power, and have twice the armor of an Exo-Fleet
E-frame, but the Exo-Fleet Frames are much more maneuverable.
The Comet: A device which wisks its target into a random point in space in
The galaxy M113, usually into a star or black whole. The Device can be
used to recover its target.
Maccion Carrier/Battleship: Ten times larger than the Resolute II and able
to go 10,000 times the speed of light these vessels have enslaved half the
galaxy and are now moving to eliminate a war-torn solar system with 10
planets (4 of them colonized, the second, third, fourth, and tenth) and
with two distinct races who have been fighting for the past three years.
These vessels each carry 500 Maccion E-Frames and have enough weapons
emplacements to destroy entire fleets of craft. Each have one Comet and a
comet can only be used once meaning that they will only be able to destroy
2 out of the 3 homeworlds this way. Exo-Fleet Code Name : The Hand Of GOD
for its extreme power. Old Characters:
Charlie 5 company: Missing with planet Chaos
J.T. Marsh: drifting, and dying where Chaos used to be.
Marsala: Senator in the Homeworlds senate and ExoFleet Reserve member.
Nara Burns: Currently trying to rebuild her farm, is still an ExoFleet
reserve member.
Wolf Bronski: After hearing about Chaos he immediately left college and
rejoined able squad.
Eve Hanley: Newest Member of Able Squad, she joined when her fianc e Wolf
Bronski rejoined.
Thrax: Another New Addition to Able Squad, he and Kaz have a bet going as
to who is the best pilot. Every week they fight each other in the
simulator and if Kaz wins, Thrax has to buy the drinks, but if Thrax wins,
Kaz has to clean and repaint Thrax's Neo Y-Wing. Kaz keeps a bucket of
red paint handy, and so far Thrax has not had to buy a single drink.
Rita Torres: Nothing much has changed
Maggie and Alec: Are restarting their romance and trying to get through
Alec's small memory gaps. He is getting used to what it is like to be
alive again, but has so far refused to step into any E-frame.
Kaz Takagi: Newly Commissioned Lt. And has recently returned to Able
Squad.
Hallas: Escaped from Chaos right before it does it's disappearing act.
Vows to get revenge on whoever made Chaos disappear even if it makes a
"Hero" out of him (hero meaning dead, like what Butler says before every
drop, interestingly has anybody noticed that Alec was being Heroic when he
got himself killed?).
Amanda Connors and Sean Napier: have begun to restart their romance after
the war ends. Are preparing to get remarried.
I believe that's it. Well now its time for the story, hope everyone likes
it (note some characters will die so watch out for that)
The Maccion Invasion
Act 1
Part 1
Not Again
"Gone, a whole planet just gone, how how could that happen, a
whole planet
COLLEEN, No not colleen, where did she and the entire planet go????"
Thought the now dying J.T. Marsh. The air supply of his E-Frame was
quickly being used up and he was in too much shock to do anything about
it. All of the sudden a pirate shuttle decloaks and another E-Frame
comes racing towards the pirate shuttle.
"Hallas, is that you?"
J.T. Asked
"Yes it is J.T. are you alright?" Hallas inquired
"Yea sure I just watched an entire planet get destroyed, am
running out of air, and have no power to rendevous with that shuttle, but
other than that I'm doing fine." J.T. Replied sarcastically.
Hallas Attached a tow cable and pulled J.T. to the shuttle where they both
landed and headed for the bridge.
"We thought we lost you two," the
pilot stated.
"Well we were luckier than most, I am
" J.T. began
"Commander J.T. Marsh leader of Flight 1 Able Squad off of the
Resolute II, Correct Commander?" the pilot asked.
"Yes."
"And you are the Pirate Hallas who attempted to assassinate Jonas
Simbacca." The pilot stated
"I will kill any man who brings up
that dishonor." Hallas yelled angrily
"Luckily I'm not a man,
I'm Admiral Maureen Shefield, I was on a mission to Chaos when it
disappeared and then I noticed Commander Marsh's E-Frame so I decloaked
and came by." Maureen told the two men who had to manually close their
jaws. When Maureen turned around both men's jaws dropped again, seeing
how hot she was.
"Admiral, By any chance do you know where we can
go, I doubt this shuttle has the range to make it to Mars." J.T. said as
he quickly recovered.
"No it doesn't but if I remember correctly
there is an Exo-Carrier performing it's trial run nearby." Maureen
answered
"The ExoCarrier Repulse, the first and finest Exo-Carrier
since the war ended" Hallas Quickly stated
"Correct Mr. Hallas, let
me see if I can raise her." Adm. Shefield stated.
After fiddling around with the controls a bit, Captain Gregory
Long's Face appeared on the view screen.
"Good Work Admiral" J.T.
Said
"I didn't Do it." Shefield responded
"I did, WTF is happening out there we measured a massive radiation
spike and then Chaos just disappeared and now we are tracking three
massive vessles heading straight towards Saturn at break neck speed." Long
interrupted.
"My E-Frame has the telemetry Captain, but for now
give us a signal so we can rendevous with you." J.T. said
"Can do
commander, and J.T. I believe you owe me fifty dollars, you bet me that
Charlie squad would be the first back to the Resolute, but in actuality we
never made it back to the Resolute."
"I don't owe you anything
Greg
but lets talk after this shuttle is aboard the Repulse." J.T. Answered
"Sounds like a good plan gentlemen, but Captain I suggest you send a
message immediately back to Admiral Simbacca and the Homeworlds." Adm.
Shefield stated
"Will do but now lets get you those
coordinates."
"What do you mean a whole planet disappeared that's impossible
Captain." Adm. Simbacca yelled at the viewscreen.
"Don't Shoot the
messenger you overgrown pirate bastard just do something about it, there
are three ships with the power to destroy a whole planet approaching the
homeworlds at 9/10 the speed of light now organize the fleet or else there
won't be any homeworlds to protect." Captain Long answered Clearly about
to have a stroke.
"I like a subordinate who has the balls to say
that to his commander when it needs to be said." Simbacca said while
laughing "I will organize the fleets and I have a vessel already on it's
way to rendezvous with you and Adm. Shefield." Simbacca stated
"What ship?" Long asked
"The Vigilance with a special payload that includes a senator, a
farmer, a neo-war vet, and a college student." Simbacca said as he turned
off the vidscreen.
"Admiral Shefield it's an Honor to welcome you aboard the Repulse,
allow me to introduce the captain of the Exo-Cruiser Magellan, Captain
Robert Richards; and this is the leader of our E-Frame wing Lt. Michael
Marcus.
"It's a pleasure to meet you lass, if we were aboard the
Magellan I would offer you some scotch." Robert Richards said in his thick
Scottish accent.
"I think we could all use a drink." Michael Marcus
said in a solemn tone.
"Now is not a time to get drunk, we have a
hostile force in-between us and the Homeworlds, and we lost half of our
E-Frames with Chaos." Captain Long reproved both of his subordinates.
"Sorry to disagree but I do believe I need a drink." Adm. Shefield
answered.
"Yes Sir". Long quickly recovered.
"But your right captain, only one drink to toast those many who
have died today." Adm. Shefield corrected herself.
"We don't know
their dead sirs," J.T. said disparity trying to convince himself of that
fact.
A petty officer arrived, and announced "Not to spoil
anybodies fun, but we have incoming close to a dozen E-Frames, but their
HUGE."
Capt. Long went to the comm. Circuit and announced "This
is Capt. Long WE have a code five alert, alert status RED, All hands to
battle stations GENERAL QUARTERS, this is not a drill All hands to battle
stations GENERAL QUARTERS." He then shut off the comm. And addressed those
assembled on the hanger bay. "Don't just sit there MOVE get to the
e-frames, Capt. Richards order your ship to General Quarters immediately,
MOVE DAMN IT, Marcus assemble the E-Frames, Marsh, Hallas get into yours
and help, admiral either get useful or get lost NOW."
Everybody
answered in unison "YES SIR."
Marcus then added, "Capt. We only have 10 E-frames including
Commander Marsh's and Hallas's we will never hold them off."
"Well then I guess you could use some back up, Lets try the new AE-Frames,
as long as we survive we can rebuild any we loose. Also we have the pirate
cruiser Vigilance carring some passengers that I think may prove useful,
incoming its ETA is 12 minutes all we need to do is hold on until then.
Mr. Richards are you going to head to the Magellan or remote command
her.
"Sir, I believe it would be most wise if I stayed here, by
the time I got to a shuttle I would be in the line of fire." Richards
stated hesitantly
"Very well, you have command of both ships, I'm
framing up."
"..Y..Y..es sir if you say so." Richards answered
quite confused.
"Good luck Mr. Richards"
"You too Captain."
"Marsh E-Frame on you six watch it."
"Thanks for the heads up Marcus, Could you give me a hand?"
`
"No can do, J.T. I have trouble of my own."
Just then two AE-Frames popped up behind Marsh's pursuer and
opened fire.
I love those little guys J.T. thought as he saw
his pursuer finally get killed after taking the amount of hits that would
take out all of Able Squad together.
"Marcus brake right on
three." J.T. heard a familiar voice order.
"Yes sir, capt. But
shouldn't you be on the bridge?" Marcus responded as Long launched two of
his turbo missiles at once and then continued to light the enemy up with
as many laser blasts as he could.
"I got two missiles coming
straight for me," Long stated as he activated the GRAF shield. Within one
second the missiles had imploded.
"DIE BASTARD!!!!!" Hallas yelled
as he eliminated an enemy frame.
" Capt. Long we're detecting
another seventy two enemy E-frames approaching our position, requesting
orders" Capt. Richards voice came over the comm..
"Shit, all
E-frames finish up quick and report back to the Repulse." Long said
uncharacteristically showing some fear.
"Repulse this is the
Vigilance we are under heavy attack, we're launching E-Frames now and
ordering them to your position, we're not going to
.." the Vigilance radioed as the comm. went dead.
"New orders all
E-frames assist the incoming Frames in fighting their way to the Repulse
and Magellan." Long ordered.
"We really could use some help out
here *Burp"
"I would recognize that Burp anywhere, Bronski is that you?" Marsh
asked.
"Yes sir, Able squad reporting as ordered, but Bronski is
right we need help now J.T." an obviously worried Nara Burns
announced.
"Able Squad, head for coordinates 94.258 by 55 niner. All
E-Frames form on me, AE-Frames, continue to engage the Enemy frames."
Marcus ordered.
"AE-Frames have suffered 100% Losses" a computer
stated.
"Damn." Long said.
All of the sudden 72 enemy E-frames appeared out of nowhere and
attacked the Repulse causing heavy damage.
"YOUR not going to take
them too." Marcus shouted
"Mike, NO" Long pleaded
"This is the only way I can redeem my family name" Marcus said as
he flew to the center of the alien force and activated his self destruct
killing half the enemy frames and making the other half retreat.
"Mike, you didn't Have to..." Long said in a solemn tone.
"All
E-frames report back to Repulse, its good to see you again Able Squad, but
a lot of good people have died today." J.T. said as he took command.
End of Act 1 Part 1
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The Maccion Invasion
Act 1
Part 2
Prologue
Following the battle of Neptune, the Repulse and Magellan are
joined by small Exofleet forces that were caught on patrol following the
attack. These are E-Frame Baker and Delta Squads, the Pirate Cruiser
Armageddon, and the Exo-Frigate Tours.
The main fleet is
currently holding orbit around Mars, while the Maccion Force is currently
fortifying a position on Tethys, and waiting for the follow up force of 12
Maccion Battle Ships. The Exofleet has recently uncovered a Neo data file
that contains huge amounts of info on the Maccions. The Gathering
Storm
(A chime is heard at the door to Capt. Long's
Quarters)
"Come in" Long said. He noticed that it was the second
most attractive member of Able Squad.
"Captain, I am here to
report that all E-Frames are in perfect working order and that all squads
are ready to go when necessary" Maggie said
"Thank you Lt.
Weston. How is Alec doing, we almost lost him when he didn't get in his
E-Frame when the Vigilance was attacked?"
"I think he will be ready
to, return to duty soon sir." Maggie said trying to convince herself.
"I hope so, we need all the pilots we can get, we might all have to follow
Marcus's example if the homeworlds are to survive."
"You can't
mean
"
"Yes I do, but we haven't come to that just yet, but we might if
they ever get reinforcements." Long said while staring at the ground.
"Capt. Long to the briefing room, Capt. Long to the briefing room" the
loudspeaker announced.
"Lt. Weston, Tell the Squad to meet me in
the briefing room in two hours" Long ordered "Very well sir."
Weston walked away, and Long waited a split second to wish for a miracle
that wouldn't make him have to do what he was by now convinced was the
only way to win this war, before he left for the Briefing room.
"General Shiva, we have detected an Exo-Fleet flotilla hiding in
the sensor shadow of Pluto, request permission to dispatch a scout ship to
investigate further." The sensor operator said.
"Negative.
Continue long range scans and set intercept course" Shiva said as he sat
down in his command chair.
"Yes Sir General Shiva, as you wish,
should I tell E-Frame and Y-Wing Pilots to prepare to launch?"
"Very well." Shiva answered. He then walked up to Daneel and said, "Now is
the time to surrender to these ExoFleet ships, but first lets scare them a
bit."
"Excellent idea sir" Daneel answered.
"Capt. Long, how nice of you to join us." Adm. Shefield said as
she was talking to Adm. Simbacca and Grand Adm. Winfield, on the
viewscreen.
"Sorry sirs, but I was in the middle of ordering
preparations for the next attack, whenever it might come." Long
answered.
"Well Captain it appears it will be happening quite soon,
we recently received word from an automated sensor that a an exact
duplicate of the Olympus Mons II is moving towards your position. We have
been discussing how to proceed." Winfield explained.
"If I may
suggest, we should attempt to get them to join us, we need that
firepower." Long suggested.
"Exactly what we were thinking. We
have one more matter to discus with you before we sign off to finish
preparations for an attack which logically should have come a couple of
days ago." Winfield said.
"What matter sirs."
"The matter of promoting you to Commodore and placing you in
command of the task force, instead of Admiral Shefield." Simbacca
said.
"But
"
"We are all aware I am your superior officer but we are also all
aware that you are a better commander for the type of battles we will be
fighting, that is why I suggested that you be placed in command of the
task force." Shefield said.
"Very well sirs, but one last
thing, if I am going to command this task force I would like to have an
autonomous command over the entire fleet, to pursue the enemy in any way I
see fit." Long requested.
"Very well Commodore, but don't disappoint
our trust." Simbacca said.
"I shan't, in fact I have an idea on how
to get Chaos back, after I reviewed the Neo file, I am pretty sure I will
be able to get it back, which means getting the two ExoCarriers stationed
there back as well."
"Undertake it Commodore, Winfield
out."
"What exactly did you have in mind Commodore" Adm. Shefield
asked.
"Meet me back here in an hour and it shall all be
explained." Long replied.
"Listen up, Here's the plan. Our Ships
will wait back here in Saturn's sensor shadow. We will launch Able Squad
in 5 Rapid assault E-Frames, each with a cloaking device, Able squad will
enter the lead enemy ship at this hatch way. Then they will proceed to
hit the Off button on the Comet. This will cause Chaos to return. When
it does and the ships from chaos meet us, we will attack from the rear
while the main fleet will attack from the front. This all hinges in
General Shiva agreeing to help us. Any Questions?" Long explained.
"Yea, how will we find the Comet Room, BURP?" Bronski Asked
"Mr. Bronski, don't bother me with the specifics because I don't know, our
info told us how to turn it off, but not where. That doesn't matter
because we need to win and sometimes one must go into battle without the
proper information, and if they can't figure it out, they die trying to,
so lets all hope that that month of college did you some good otherwise
I'll be coming your earthly remains to space." Long reproved.
"Yes, SIR, Commodore SIR." Bronski said obviously quite taken aback by
Commodore Long's strong orders.
"That's the first time you got it
right Bronski." Torres said jokingly.
"But sarge, what about
that time back aboard the old Resulute
" Bronski began.
"Can it Bronski." Torres said.
"Yes Sarge." Bronski said.
"Listen up, this hole thing hinges on General Shiva, I need four
volunteers to accompany me on the shuttle when we go to try to make peace,
any takers
No well then Deleon, Marsh, Marsala, and Burns, your with me. We leave at
oh seven thirty, get some rest tonight, depending on Shiva's attitude, it
might be your last." Long said.
"Yes SIR." The entire squad said
in unison.
"Oh and one last thing, until we return Thrax is in command of
Able squad, I know he isn't the highest ranked, but he has more command
experience than all of you combined. Consider him GOD while he's in
charge." Marsh said.
"Yes SIR" the squad again said in
unison.
The END of Part Two
Coming soon Part Three
Long's Prayer
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